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I'm writing for the first time tonight;
When the love is strong,
And the stars are bright.

Writing for the future...
Writing for the past,
Just to see how long it shall last.

A whispering presence
Of company beholds,
Grasping the words and within they mold.

Leaking emotion
By the gentle strokes of the pen,
Portraying hurt, but no sin.

Darkness implodes,
Resting at Nightmare's Inn.
Waking up to everything, but still wondering why you've been, where you've been.

Silence prevails,
Fore love has grown,
The mystery ebbs away and the darkness is gone.

Yet passion is extravagant,
Bursting from the roots.
Life is so much sweeter, when you've found the golden loot.

So for the first time tonight
The writing came to me,
But it is all because of thee.

Thy may not write the swiftest words,
Or speak the chosen sentences.
As Influence has minor and master keys.

Confusion must unravel
To see the beauty within;
Of a poets words, Of a blind mans thoughts, together in a den.

Forever this may withhold,
But tiredness is sure to unfold,
Lending conclusions for writing this first time...

With the love strong,
And the stars bright...
That is when, I say, Goodnight.
<3
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JustMeBeingADork Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey Holly ~
Guess what?
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMGOMGOMGOMG I STILL CAN'T GET OVER HOW AMAZING IT IS SOMETIMES I JUST COME TO THIS PAGE A JUST STARE AT IT OH MY GOD YOU ARE SO TALENTED I LOVE YOU :iconcannotevenplz:
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHH. THANK YOU!!! I LOVE U TOOOOO!!!! :D
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
A lovely piece. Amazing job.
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
You're welcome. :aww:
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Hanikyu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012   General Artist
damn holly~ *A* the first time I read this I was speechless, and even though now i've read it a million times more, I cant get over how just amazing it is <333
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bahhhhh!!! Thank you so much Sararararar!!! :DDDDDD
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Hanikyu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012   General Artist
you are so welcome love <333 ITS BECAUSE YOURE SO FREAKING AMAZING X333
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Rocky-Stray Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Thanks for submiting to the royal scribe!
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure!
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chalekam Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
'Darkness implodes' and 'Nightmare's Inn' are incredible images! Your poem is beautifully honest, the actual words we use may seem cheesy but they are more than enuff when spoken in ernest. Well done!
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D
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anabehibak Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
lindo
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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CADFND Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This is a very beautiful piece! :D Good job!
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D
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CADFND Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D Keep up the good work!
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angel3433 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful!
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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angel3433 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome!
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DdotCdotR Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
An extravagant piece of work :D enjoyed reading it :)
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D
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DdotCdotR Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Np :D hope to see mor of it :DD
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inukagome134 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Very nice poem, I couldn't stop reading until I had finished it~ :clap: Great job~ :love: :)
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh, thank you so much! :D
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1630lucky Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i really love htis peom. your style of writing is really good
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, thank you so much. :D
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1630lucky Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
of course it was really good
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BleedTheDream180 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I gotta admit that this is one of the best poems I've read on here, especially the first 3 stanzas!
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. Truly. :)
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BleedTheDream180 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
welcome :)
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LegendaryHyuuzo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Wow... It's been a while since I've seen a good poem... Really bealtiful! NIcely Done! ^^
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, it means the world to me! :D
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LegendaryHyuuzo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
You welcome!! Also, the world needs more people like you!! =D
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mysterious love in the night.:clap:
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome!:D
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prinprin Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love how the poem just naturally flows :heart:
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful. I really have nothing else to say; it is beautiful.
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, honestly, thank you. :D
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laffinia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
well written, nice flow
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :D
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laffinia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
welcome!
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Vianca2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Absolute beautiful I love it
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. :D
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Vianca2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Its a Pleaser :)
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SugarfreeSaccharine Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wow...
just wow... :iconiloveitplz:
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Whitetiger807 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, very much. :)
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SugarfreeSaccharine Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome ^^
it jst looks like it would make a nice song, maybe in japanese too :dance:
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