I'm writing for the first time tonight;
When the love is strong,
And the stars are bright.
Writing for the future...
Writing for the past,
Just to see how long it shall last.
A whispering presence
Of company beholds,
Grasping the words and within they mold.
By the gentle strokes of the pen,
Portraying hurt, but no sin.
Resting at Nightmare's Inn.
Waking up to everything, but still wondering why you've been, where you've been.
Fore love has grown,
The mystery ebbs away and the darkness is gone.
Yet passion is extravagant,
Bursting from the roots.
Life is so much sweeter, when you've found the golden loot.
So for the first time tonight
The writing came to me,
But it is all because of thee.
Thy may not write the swiftest words,
Or speak the chosen sentences.
As Influence has minor and master keys.
Confusion must unravel
To see the beauty within;
Of a poets words, Of a blind mans thoughts, together in a den.
Forever this may withhold,
But tiredness is sure to unfold,
Lending conclusions for writing this first time...
With the love strong,
And the stars bright...
That is when, I say, Goodnight.
A lovely piece. Amazing job.
damn holly~ *A* the first time I read this I was speechless, and even though now i've read it a million times more, I cant get over how just amazing it is <333
Bahhhhh!!! Thank you so much Sararararar!!! DDDDD
Thanks for submiting to the royal scribe!
'Darkness implodes' and 'Nightmare's Inn' are incredible images! Your poem is beautifully honest, the actual words we use may seem cheesy but they are more than enuff when spoken in ernest. Well done!
This is a very beautiful piece! Good job!
An extravagant piece of work enjoyed reading it
Very nice poem, I couldn't stop reading until I had finished it~ Great job~
i really love htis peom. your style of writing is really good
I gotta admit that this is one of the best poems I've read on here, especially the first 3 stanzas!
Wow... It's been a while since I've seen a good poem... Really bealtiful! NIcely Done! ^^
Thank you so much, it means the world to me!
Mysterious love in the night.
I love how the poem just naturally flows
Beautiful. I really have nothing else to say; it is beautiful.
well written, nice flow
Absolute beautiful I love it